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Success Story Interview - Ellen Mulholland

An Interview with Ellen Mulholland (ellen911 on QT) upon receiving an offer of representation from agent Rebecca Angus of Howland Literary.

12/09/2024

QT: Can you tell us a little bit about the book for which you've found representation? What inspired you to write it?
Ellen Mulholland:
My offer came for my middle grade fantasy, THE KEY TO FALLS TOOTH WOODS. It’s an eco-thriller where an adventure-thirsty girl sets out to prove she is over her fear of the woods. Until she learns they’re alive.
QT: How long have you been writing?
Ellen Mulholland:
I wrote my first novel draft more than 30 years ago but didn’t get serious until about ten years later.
QT: How long have you been working on this book?
Ellen Mulholland:
I worked on Falls Tooth during the past year.
QT: Was there ever a time you felt like giving up, and what helped you to stay on course?
Ellen Mulholland:
I’ve stayed true to my dream, but it’s been rough. After my first agent dropped me, I spent two years working on my writing and querying like crazy.
QT: Is this your first book?
Ellen Mulholland:
I’ve written about ten stories over the years.
QT: Do you have any formal writing training?
Ellen Mulholland:
I’m a trained journalist but I’ve taken a few writing courses as well as one with author T.C. Boyle.
QT: Do you follow a writing routine or schedule?
Ellen Mulholland:
I have the luxury of getting up early and writing for at least four hours every day. I like the routine, and I always have something to work on.
QT: How many times did you re-write/edit your book?
Ellen Mulholland:
Is a story ever not being edited?
QT: Did you have beta readers for your book?
Ellen Mulholland:
I have several trusted critique partners and a few beta readers who offer feedback on all my stories.
QT: Did you outline your book, or do you write from the hip?
Ellen Mulholland:
I am a true plotter! I outline enough to create a synopsis, then let the story flow as I get to know the characters and setting.
QT: How long have you been querying for this book? Other books?
Ellen Mulholland:
I started querying Falls Tooth October 1, 2023 (I love that I could find out this data through QT’s amazing archive!)
QT: About how many query letters did you send out for this book?
Ellen Mulholland:
For this particular book, I sent 42.
QT: On what criteria did you select the agents you queried?
Ellen Mulholland:
I do a ton of research for the agents I query. That includes: MSWL website, social media stalking, finding out agents for authors whose books comp mine, talking to other writers, Discord chats, and on and on… It’s a second job lol
QT: Did you tailor each query to the specific agent, and if so, how?
Ellen Mulholland:
In my experience, personalization isn’t so necessary. Agents are busy. I try to prune my query letters as much as possible. However, if there is something in particular that I think connects us, I will add a single opening line.
QT: What advice would you give other writers seeking agents?
Ellen Mulholland:
DO. NOT. GIVE. UP. Also, don’t query until your story is publish-ready. That doesn’t mean it’s perfect, but it’s as perfect as you can make it right now. Do your research on agents and agencies. Remember, we’re all human; we make mistakes. But you want this agent to be someone you trust. Think of it like finding a partner. They can’t satisfy all your needs, but they should be someone you respect and one who elevates you.

Query Letter:

When 12-year-old Millie Merken arrives at her grandparents’ house with plans to reclaim her adventure-self, she discovers buried family secrets and a nearby haunted woods seeking revenge on humans.

I am excited to introduce my middle-grade eco-horror fantasy, THE KEY TO FALLS TOOTH WOODS (54,000 words). Set in the lush Sierra Nevada mountains, this story weaves the suspenseful chill of Small Spaces with the folklore-infused mystery of The Curse of Eelgrass Bog.

Sixty years ago, the Merken family sold part of their land to a timber mill, triggering devastating consequences. Now, the Forest Sovereign—a sentient redwood steeped in dark magic—demands retribution. As Millie tries to help her grandfather, whose memory is slipping into dementia, she discovers a horrifying truth: His confusion isn’t from age but from the day her aunt was lured into the woods years ago. Determined to uncover the truth, Millie strikes a dangerous deal with the Sovereign. If she plants supernatural seeds to restore the forest’s power, the Sovereign returns her grandfather’s lost memories.

But navigating Falls Tooth Woods is more treacherous than she imagined. Faced with forest serpents, river dragons, and the tormented souls of drowned children, Millie uncovers a conspiracy involving the sheriff—and realizes her family’s guilt isn’t what it seems. With the Sovereign holding her mother captive and time running out, Millie must decide to fight for the truth or surrender to the forest’s revenge.

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